Educator guide · Term 4

Write a transition statement from a year of noticing, not a week of remembering.

A transition statement is the one document a new teacher is most likely to read before a child walks in. The hard part is rarely the form. It is finding, in November, the real moments that show who this child is. This guide covers what each state asks for and how to have that evidence ready.

Start with what actually happened: one action, quote, attempt, change, or question. A polished observation is never required.

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Reviewed 17 September 2026 · Written by Leo, who builds StoryLoop, in Ōtautahi Christchurch

What StoryLoop does with a note

A rough note in, a learning story out.

A real note an educator typed, and the start of the draft StoryLoop wrote from it, unedited, with the Te Whāriki links, learning and next steps to follow.

The note · Aroha, 2 to 3 years
Aroha tried to put her shoes on before going outside. Velcro kept folding over. Asked 'help me' then pushed my hand away and did the second one herself. Stood up and stomped both feet.
The draft, as StoryLoop wrote it

Putting on her own shoes

Before going outside, Aroha tried to put her shoes on by herself. The Velcro kept folding over, making the job trickier. Aroha asked, "help me", letting us know clearly that she needed support.

When help was offered, Aroha pushed the adult hand away and did the second shoe herself. Once both shoes were on, she stood up and stomped both feet. This looked like Aroha checking that her shoes were on and feeling the result with her whole body.

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Know what your state asks for

Victoria's TLDS is a kindergarten funding requirement. NSW services with Start Strong funding must complete a Transition to School Statement. Queensland's approved kindergartens complete one in November. New Zealand has no national statement. Details for each are below.

Write from strengths and evidence

Describe what the child does, how they learn best and what helps them, using moments you actually saw. Leave out labels you are not qualified to give, comparisons with other children and anything you could not point to in your documentation.

Bring the family and child in

Families know things no service does, and several states build their voice into the statement itself. Victoria's TLDS includes a section for the child and one for the family, and families must be able to opt out of it being shared with the school.

What each place actually asks for

Victoria. Every child moving from a funded kindergarten program to school needs a Transition Learning and Development Statement. It is completed in the Online TLDS tool on the Insight Assessment Platform, which opens mid-year. Educators complete Section 1, which covers learning and development against the VEYLDF outcomes and the teaching strategies that have worked, plus extra information for children with diverse learning needs. The child contributes Section 2 with an adult's support, and the family completes Section 3. The family receives the completed statement and can opt out of it being shared with the school.

New South Wales. If your service receives Start Strong funding, a Transition to School Statement must be completed for children in the year before Kindergarten and shared with families and the new school before the school year starts. Other services are encouraged to complete one. Department preschools, community preschools and long day care centres can use the Transition to School Digital Statement; other service types use the PDF statement for now. It captures a child's strengths, interests and preferred ways of learning, and the strategies that have helped.

Queensland. Approved and funded kindergarten providers complete a written transition statement for each child in November of the kindergarten year and give it to families. It summarises learning across the five learning and development areas of the Queensland kindergarten learning guideline, from a strengths-based perspective, and parents, carers and children contribute to it. With consent it is created in the Kindergarten Transition Statement application in the QCAA Portal; otherwise the QCAA template is used.

South Australia, Western Australia, Tasmania, the ACT and the Northern Territory each handle this in their own way, and requirements change. Check your education department's current guidance rather than relying on another state's form.

Aotearoa New Zealand. There is no national written statement. Most children start school around their fifth birthday, so a kindergarten farewells children all year rather than in one December wave. Te Whāriki treats the pathway to school and kura as part of the curriculum, and the practical handover is usually a child's portfolio of learning stories, shared with whānau and, with their agreement, with the new teacher.

The statement is only as good as the year behind it

Every one of these formats asks the same underlying question: who is this child as a learner, and what helps them? You can only answer that well if you noticed them across the year. The statements that help a new teacher are specific. Not "confident and social", but the morning she talked a new child through the bike shed routine, in her own words.

The common failure is not bad writing. It is thin evidence. By November a room of twenty-two children has blurred together, the child who never makes a fuss has almost nothing on file, and the statement fills with safe, general phrases that could describe anyone. Gathering a few dated moments per child each term, and checking who has been missed, prevents that far better than any template.

Two habits make the biggest difference. First, keep the child's actual words when you hear something telling, because a new teacher learns more from one real sentence than from a paragraph of description. Second, write down what you did that helped, not only what the child did. The next teacher needs your strategies as much as your observations.

Example wording you can adapt

These show the style, not text to paste. Each one says what the child did and what helped, so a new teacher can use it on day one. Replace every detail with something you actually saw and recorded.

Interests and strengths: "Mia's strongest interest this year has been building. In August she spent most of a morning making a ramp for the cars, testing three heights and choosing the one where the cars 'go fast but don't fly off'."

Relationships: "Tom takes time to join a group. He usually watches first from the edge of the sandpit, and joins in when an adult names what the group is doing and offers him a role."

Approaches to learning: "When a task is hard, Ava tries a second way before asking for help. Asking her 'what else could you try?' works better for her than showing her the answer."

Communication: "Sione speaks Samoan at home and English at kindergarten. He talks most in small groups, and he loves retelling stories with the puppets."

What helps: "Arrivals go best when Sam has a job straight away, like feeding the fish. A few minutes' warning before a change of activity helps him move on calmly."

Notice what is missing: no "shy", no "behind", no labels. Each sentence describes something a teacher could see for themselves, and what has worked.

What to leave out

A transition statement follows a child into a new place, so write it for a reader who has never met them and may keep it. Leave out diagnoses or developmental labels you are not qualified to give. Leave out comparisons with other children, and other children's names. Describe a difficulty through what helps, rather than as a trait the child is. If you could not point to a moment in your documentation that shows something, it does not belong in the statement.

Family information deserves particular care. Include what the family has chosen to share for this purpose, in their words where you can, and nothing they told you in confidence.

Where StoryLoop fits

StoryLoop does not fill in your state's official form, and it does not write a transition statement for you. What it does is make sure the evidence is there when you need it. Through the year it turns quick notes into learning stories you edit and own, and on Educator Pro a quiet child radar shows who has not been noticed lately, skipping school holidays, so the child who never makes a fuss is not the one with an empty file in November.

When the time comes, the transition pack on the Educator plan puts up to six moments you choose onto one printable page, next to the child's voice from those stories, what they love, languages at home, the family's own words and the next steps still open. Nothing on it is generated or rewritten. Use it as your source while you complete the official statement, or with the family's agreement, give it to the new teacher alongside it.

FAQ

Straight answers for educators.

Is a transition to school statement compulsory?+

It depends where you are and how your service is funded. In Victoria a TLDS is a kindergarten funding requirement for every child moving to school. In NSW it is required for services receiving Start Strong funding and recommended for others. In Queensland approved and funded kindergarten providers are expected to complete one. New Zealand has no national requirement. For other states and territories, check your education department's current guidance.

Do families have to agree before the statement goes to the school?+

Follow your state's process and your service's privacy policy. Victoria requires that families receive the completed TLDS and are given the chance to opt out of it being shared with the school. Queensland's online Kindergarten Transition Statement application is used with parent or carer consent, with a template available where consent is not given.

When should I start gathering evidence?+

From the start of the year. Victoria's online TLDS tool opens around July, and Queensland statements are completed in November, but the statement is only as good as the observations behind it. A few specific, dated moments across the year say far more than a summary written from memory.

Can I use AI to write a transition statement?+

The statement is a professional judgement about a real child, so an educator has to write and stand behind it. Do not put identifying information about a child into a general AI tool. StoryLoop's transition pack does not write anything: it gathers the stories, the child's voice and the family's words you have already recorded onto one page, for you to draw on when you complete the official statement.

What about New Zealand?+

There is no national transition statement in Aotearoa, and because most children start school around their fifth birthday, transitions happen all year rather than in one end-of-year rush. Te Whāriki treats pathways to school and kura as part of the curriculum, and many services share a child's learning stories with whānau and, with their agreement, with the new school.

Does StoryLoop replace educator thinking?+

No. StoryLoop supports drafting and structure, while educators remain responsible for observation, interpretation, reflection, final editing, and sign-off.

Can I edit the generated stories?+

Yes. Stories are editable after generation and saved in history, so educators can add context, adjust wording, copy, export, or regenerate from the original observation.

Does it create generic AI stories?+

StoryLoop is designed to avoid generic, poetic AI wording. It asks for real observations, keeps claims evidence-based, and links curriculum only when the observation supports it.

How many stories are free?+

The free plan includes 3 learning stories per month. Upgrade prompts are dismissible, and existing history remains available even if the free limit is reached.